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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-10-18 06:03 PM



Can't help but
wonder
how you're hands would feel in
mine
As you take me to that
place in time
reserve for our romance
Kiss me slowly
honey
All I want is you
Caress me gently
but love me hard
Leave your mark
in my heart
so that I never forget
about tonight
Love me this once

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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

1 posted 2001-10-18 06:16 PM


Beautiful!

Maree  

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

2 posted 2001-10-18 06:42 PM


What an offer...lucky guy.
sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29
Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist
3 posted 2001-10-18 06:45 PM


Lovely write!    Enjoyed.
   Hugs ~Marie~

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-10-18 06:48 PM


YES!!  This is what women want!!  Read up here men!  Excellent write.  ~hugs, Nancy~


  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
5 posted 2001-10-18 07:27 PM


A beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading.
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
6 posted 2001-10-18 07:47 PM


Well   this sure tells us what you want. BRAVO!!!Well said. You will have no problem catching them with words like this.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-18-2001).]

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
7 posted 2001-10-18 11:20 PM


What lovely thoughts. Now you've started me off thinking of my own daydreams Eunice !!!.  

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

[This message has been edited by Tracey (edited 10-18-2001).]

Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
8 posted 2001-10-19 11:57 AM


love me once my dear
then love me once yet again
shall we try for three

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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