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Victoria
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0 posted 2001-10-18 04:08 PM



Senor, I would love to dance with you
Im a senorita lonely and blue
sheltered from life
I would love to be your wife
and have a bambino
who looks just like you

Senor, I would love to cook for you
and share a margarita or two
when you awake
from your siesta
Will you share your dreams?
share them with me
beneath  strings of moonlight
and the serenade of a palm tree

Let me bathe your calloused hands
with the softness of my lips
can you feel my shadow?
like a lunar eclipse
drawing closer
with the shyness of my kiss

Senor, I must leave
before you awake
Im just an innocent senorita
but my heart truly aches

In the shadow of your Sombrero
i leave you a red rose
within its red petals
my love from a distance will grow

My love for you..I guess you will never know
unless you recognize the little girl
who played beneath the pinata
with long ebony curls
Will you remember the paper red rose?
Adios Senor, Adios


                            
      
                                                                            

                                          
                        
                                      


Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-18-2001).]

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RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-10-18 04:40 PM


Victoria this is so very cool!
That senor will notice you and think of you every time he hears the madonna song "La isla bonita" LOL! : )

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-10-18 04:45 PM


May all your Senorita dreams come true...James
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3 posted 2001-10-18 04:48 PM


Ah, an ice cold Tecate with salt on the rim and a lime. A rose on the bed which we can strip of it's petals. Muy bueno!
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4 posted 2001-10-18 05:09 PM


Your words fell like those sweet treats from the pinata.
Gracias!

Victoria
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5 posted 2001-10-18 05:10 PM


thank you rosepetal...i am so happy you enjoyed    

james...romantic James..thank you for peeking in    

Gracias Ricardo...even a  Corona would do ha..    

Midnightsun..Gracias to you too..glad you enjoyed  

[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 10-18-2001).]

Startime
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6 posted 2001-10-18 07:42 PM


I love poems about being in love and this one sang with incredible beauty. Sensual passion fills your words. I hope the Senorita's dreams come true.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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7 posted 2001-10-18 08:39 PM


This is so cute I love it.
Victoria
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8 posted 2001-10-18 10:27 PM


thank you startime and walker...so nice to hear from both of you..

                              ~Victoria~

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