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Autumn Haiku |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Autumn Colored leaves falling A graceful dance in the wind Petal soft landings Smell of burning leaves Scent drifting through crisp fall air Youthful memories. I need a darn quote. *chuckles* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Tara, these are so so beautiful! (smiles) I love autumn, and just seeing those leaves flutter in your beautiful haikus made me remember when I was a little boy jumping around in them! (kiss on cheek) These are so gorgeous, I LOVE THEM!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
This is really very lovely, and brings to mind many youthful memories, of playing and watching the leaves dance among the wind....thank you...  Lauren ***** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-17-2001).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just lovely Tara...thank you for sharing! ~NancyLee~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Tara, This is very pretty and brings many memories to mind. I love the smell of burning leaves. I still jump into piles of them in the fall. Hey, I'll never get too old to do that. It's fun! Thanks for such a nice piece. *hugs*Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!I love the look, feel and smell of autumn. These are wonderful. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Alwye
Moderator
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Beautiful haikus! Autumn is my favorite time of year....you've captured it simply and perfectly. Well done!  *Krista Knutson* |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
as always, my dear, you amaze me. Beautiful, and stuff. now if only i had a real autumn here to compare it to......... I Love The Smell Of Napalm In The AM! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Spring and Autumn are my favourite times of year...excellent haikus m'friend! Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah - Your words of praise are always so heart warming. Thank you for stopping in, I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Lauren - I love a windy autumn day. I can watch the leaves kick up for hours. Thank you for coming in to read NancyLee - Thank you for stopping in I'm happy you liked it.Michael - It's way to long since I've went tumbling in leaves *chuckles* But I can still remember how fun it was. Thank you for stopping Startime - Thank you for coming in to read Alwye - Thank you I love autumn as well! I'm glad you enjoyed.Dave - Thank you dear I wish you had one too. The beauty of autumn is simply stunning. The mountians in the distance are filled with color I know you would love it. Love you  Melissa -  Thank you! I'm so glad you liked them Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
These are both simply stunning! Maree |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
It is a lovely time of year to inspire isn't it? These are wonderful and definitely express the feelings well. Applause your way. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is simply gorgeous! Great imagery. Deb |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very good. I like this. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Maree - I'm happy you liked them. Thank you Mark - It is SOOO good to see your name here.. you have no idea. I've missed seeing your name. I'm glad you liked them Deb - Thanks for stopping in to see. BloomingRose - Thank you for your kind words Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
trees are undressing unashamed of the process it is nature's way Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
rosepetals- Oh...I DO love these...very much! Beautifully done, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Good to see you again. Nice autmn write I saw you trip hope you enjoy your fall! HAHAH bad joke. Where in Texas anywhere near me? |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Rosepetals25..I enjoyed this. You did the style wonderfully. |
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