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vandana
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0 posted 2001-10-17 06:42 PM



Do you know?
What remains now?
When there Is love
within our heart,
so no more worries,
No more tears,
No more fears,
no more pains,
But tears of joy,
When rain falls on us,
we become overjoy
and sing along
what our hearts says,
when There Is love In us,
So why are we crying for?
When There Is love
around us,
nothing matters
more than that,
you know,
we were been trying to
say the words
we been waiting
for long time,
When there Is love
where we can find
our hearts together.....
When there Is love In us,
And find our dreams come along,
when there Is love....

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 10-17-2001).]

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-10-17 06:44 PM


Yes, when there is love a magic seems to happen that makes everything beautiful. Very well said. I really liked reading this poem.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sven
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2 posted 2001-10-17 07:30 PM


yes. . . this is how it should be my friend. . .

wonderfully done. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-10-17 10:24 PM




(smiles) Your beautiful heart shines with the magic of love, and the miracles and gifts it brings! (big hugggssssss) This is so beautiful, sweet vandana, I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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