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0 posted 2001-10-17 04:35 PM




    glancing back we bid adieu
    my mouth bruised by passions kiss
    anticipating a future rendezvous.


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1 posted 2001-10-17 06:06 PM


OOOOOOOOOOOOO YEAH!
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2 posted 2001-10-17 06:10 PM


Nightshade, nice sensual one! oo la la.  

smiles ~Marie~
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3 posted 2001-10-17 06:29 PM


wayoutwalt & sunshinemist - thankyou both for your comments on my tiny "oohlala." Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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4 posted 2001-10-17 07:13 PM


Oh my Chris!  Sounds like it has been an enjoyable afternoon.  Love ya, Teed  

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

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5 posted 2001-10-17 07:50 PM


It would be a bruise to make one weep with pleasure!  I loved this!

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Anna

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6 posted 2001-10-17 07:53 PM


A passionate kiss for sure. The perfect response.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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7 posted 2001-10-17 08:44 PM


NancyLee, Lady of Shallot & Startime - Thankyou sweet poets for your kind comments, Hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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8 posted 2001-10-17 09:15 PM




(smiles) Oooohhhhh., this is so sweet and romantic! (big hugggssssss) I love it, you write of beautiful romance so well! (kiss on cheek) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2001-10-17 10:22 PM


Noah, What sweet comments, Thankyou, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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