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Love Stands Still
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Love Stands Still |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Love Stands Still Loves ever gentle caress floating like a soft breeze fills the hearts emptiness the soul seems to freeze. ~*~ Melting into time savoring only each other hearts seem to chime beautiful music, as non other. ~*~ Love stands still soft moans of pleasure giving and receiving till... releasing its final treasure. ~*~ Like a flickering candle glowing in the dark too hot to handle loves passions spark. ~*~ Ecstasy fills the air with a sweet perfume joining two aware... of love in full bloom. ~*~ Love stands still in tender sweet embrace as passion spills... a glow upon your face. ~sunshinemist~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Liked this much me friend...lots of warmth in your words... jwesley |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
jwestly- thank you, my friend. Glad that you enjoyed it.  ~hugs Marie~smiles ~Marie~ |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, this one shows the growing heat of love's sweet passion. I like this!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Chris- thank you for the read. Yes is does show passions. Love is grand!  smiles ~Marie~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
very nice..... well done |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Zinsser- Thank you kindly. Nice to meet you. smiles ~Marie~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is romance, and dreams all rolled up in one sweet poem. Well done! Deb |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
I wanna party with you dude o yuh! |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Deb- thank you so much for your sweet comments. Romance and dream, a great combination. ~hugs Marie~------------------- Wayoutwalt- LOL!! Party did someone mention party??  Thank you! ~hugs~smiles ~Marie~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Pure romance with the fire of passion. Magnificent. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ok. . . I can't read any more really Romantic poems tonight. . . excellent. . . flowing freely from the heart. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Startime- thank you so much for the read and lovely comments. ~hugs~ Marie ----------- Sven- You know that you love romantic poems. Thank you for your lovely comments. ~hugs Marie~smiles ~Marie~ happiness is contentment of the heart [This message has been edited by sunshinemist (edited 10-17-2001).] |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
A beautiful poem and so romantic. Enjoyed reading it. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Marie, this is so so beautiful and whimsical and timelessly romantic! (big hugggssssss) Your beautiful words make lovers stop in time, embracing in the magic of passionate romance! Here's a special kiss on the cheek for you! (muah) (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
oh this is so tenderly sweet and romantic! ~ cottage |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
SmartChick, Thank you kindly and for enjoying. ~hugs Marie~ Noah, Thank you for those beautiful words. The kiss was nice too ~hugs Marie~ Cottage, thank you for the read. Nice to meet you too. ~ hugs Marie~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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