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Silence Tells Me Nothing
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Silence Tells Me Nothing |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Silence Tells Me Nothing If done something wrong I only wish that I knew Silence tells me nothing Just what did I do If your heart as reason Could there be doubt Silence tells me nothing What is this about If your heart is broken Could I help to mend Silence tells me nothing Speak dear friend If your heart is aching Could I help repair Silence tells me nothing Call I will be there If your heart is ready Could I help sustain Silence tells me nothing Shall we begin again Hope © 2001 |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Very nice, although I tend toward silence over noise, sometimes we are reduced to reading just the actions. Enjoyed this poem, writing and content Gloom |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Professor, yes I do enjoy peace and tranquilty myself , this was about someone I was waiting to hear from Hope |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
hi hope..they say silence speaks louder than words..but sometimes people dont want to hear the words..because words can hurt i guess...nice to get things off your chest instead of letting them fester.. ~Victoria~ |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Oh, yes it really does speak to us. It lets us know our hearts are still beating and we have blood running through our veins and passion moving and well, silence is wonderful at times. Other times it can play tricks on your mind! I enjoyed reading this! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
Sometimes silence tells everything....  A well-done lovely piece...with so many beautiful lines. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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