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Startime
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0 posted 2001-10-17 09:41 AM


AWAKENED HURRICANE

I feel it when I start to grow
power swirling around
Taking a breath I taste the thrill
when I become a sound

Stretching out I join in the dance
drawing all into me
The tempo builds as passions flow
alive for all to see

My voice screams as the air ignites
leaving calm center core
Building I spread with increased speed
driving close to your shore

Shattering all that's in my path
for this is my domain
Warnings go out to make aware
AWAKENED HURRICANE

Karen Torbiak 2001©



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1 posted 2001-10-17 10:44 AM



Having one of those days of power, hey?  Well done!

SmartChick
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2 posted 2001-10-17 11:00 AM


Wow! I really like this.
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2001-10-17 11:02 AM


Karin,
Well blow me down I'll have to get out of your way. Enjoyed the read

wayoutwalt
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4 posted 2001-10-17 04:22 PM


i'm runnin outta the way of this thrill o' a poem
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5 posted 2001-10-17 04:26 PM


Startime....as usual...another one of your
magnificent poems that you graciously share
with all of us.  You post awesome words.
Thank You.

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