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Zig to my Zag
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Zig to my Zag |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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Zig to my Zag Zig to my Zag would you please even if you are about to sneeze or whatever you’re doing in that car you didn’t miss me by very far! It’s been a long day don’t you see and in my pants I don’t want to pee so if you have to drive like that please pick on someone else to splat! You’re the fourth dumb driver today that’s nearly gotten in my way so do take heed of my complaint go home before you become a saint! © 10-16-01 |
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PoetryLuvR Junior Member
since 2001-07-27
Posts 16Ca, USA |
hahaha its cute  not what I thought of when I first read the title ...very cute. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
whimsy read very nice yuh |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Must have been the alignment of yesterday's stars, I "ran" across more than my usual share of cell phone/make up applying crackheads endangering lives. |
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Ann Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64Australia |
i enjoyed this one alot God bless and best wishes, ~Ann~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Keep safe among the drivers this day. I pray that you do not have to deal with much of their craziness. It just seems to be getting worse all the time. Well written poem that puts many of my own feelings into verse. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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