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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Echoes Echoes unfold as sounds are known, fields of gold hum a soft tone. *** Whisper in the air a soft caress leaves everywhere the wind does possess. *** Echoes in the hills chant a lovely tune call of the whipporwills spring coming soon. *** Song of the nightingale its music does betray howling a gastly tale winter winds do relay. *** Echoes... listen for their call swift as the hummingbird soft as the nightfall. ~sunshinemist~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sounds like a warm autumn evening to me. I could see it, feel it and hear it. Absolutely beautiful. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very beautiful....echoes are truly neat to hear...a nice poem. [This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 10-16-2001).] |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Startime, thank you very much. Glad that you enjoyed it.  I really love natures sounds too. ~hugs~------------ Magnus, thank you so much for sharing the echoes with me. ~hugs~ smiles ~Marie~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Song of the nightingale its music does betray howling a gastly tale winter winds do relay. Great verse...great poem. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Duncan, thank you kindly.  ~hugs~smiles ~Marie~ |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
What a wonderful poem. I enjoyed it much. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SunshineMist~ 'Echoes... listen for their call swift as the hummingbird soft as the nightfall.' What a wonderful, wonderful thought~ Oh this is just so creatively lovely~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
so so pretty..... Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul.... |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Munda- thank you, glad that you enjoyed! ~hugs Marie~ ------------- Marge- thank you so very much for your wonderful comments. I appreciate them!  ~hugs Marie~----------------- Whispers caress- thank you kindly. ~hugs~ Marie smiles ~Marie~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
sunshinemist, Such wonderful images. A sweet poem which I thoroughly enjoyed. Thanks. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Larry- thank you so much for the read and enjoying! ~hugs Marie~smiles ~Marie~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
sunshinemist- What a lovely write...much enjoyed. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Vickey, Thank you kindly. So glad that you enjoyed it. ......~hugs Marie~smiles ~Marie~ |
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