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. . . Fly to my arms . . . Senryu
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. . . Fly to my arms . . . Senryu |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Mmmm very nice....a reply to Nightshade's. Lovely few lines that pack a wallop! Enjoyed, Nancy.  ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A wonderful reply to Nightshade's poem. Her heart is sure to feel its tenderness. Well done. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 10-16-2001).] |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
in rendering flight to mysteries of a kiss you should fly so high |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is very interesting and unique....I need to read up on this type of poem...that I may understand it better. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
most definitely!!! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh my dear Interloper, this is lovely. I am blushing!! Thankyou, Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Enchantress~ thanks for your kind words if my words pack a wallop I did something right Startime~ thank you for reading her heart's tenderness is know ans shownin her work Lady~ high flying kissers are a mystery to me I'll keep feet on ground Magnus~ done in just three lines five counts and then seven counts then five counts again The Lady of Shallot~ most definitely I wonder what is so sure could you please explain Nightshade~ the lady blushes natural cheek coloring you have honored me Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
we will part briefly as our need begs us return hurry to my arms  [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-17-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yuh ~! |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
I like these small, with a powerful message poems. New to me, but Great! ~hugs~ Marie smiles ~Marie~ |
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