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JulieAnn
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0 posted 2001-10-16 03:48 PM



2001~his work is done
2002~still the fighting isn't through
2003~no longer free
2004~terrorism knocks once more
2005~mankind fighting to survive
2006~the fightings gone on 312 weeks
2007~angels descend from heaven
2008~opens more of hells gate
2009~mankind pays for his crime
2010~when will the war end?
2011~his voice calls from heaven
2012~are stripped of their wealth
2013~so much uncertain
2014~thousands return to quarantine
2015~are off somewhere drifting
2016~are living in dictation
2017~pray the war will end eventually
2018~america no longer a free nation
2020~no longer ruled by money
2021~still no one has won
2022~shedding our rights 2x2
2023~whatever shall be shall be
2024~biohazard seeps under your door
2025~artificial oxygen keeps you alive
2026~10 billion dieing, homeless or sick
2027~an army descends from heaven
2028~time to meet our fate
2029~we've ignored all of the signs
2030~do you think you are worthy?
2031~the war is almost done
2032~we were long over due
2033~his children finally free!!!


Just me BREAKING FREE of the manifestations of MAN, cut the cords one by one, finding no understanding except from the most divine one, it's happening

[This message has been edited by JulieAnn (edited 10-16-2001).]

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-10-16 04:06 PM


WOW!!!What an interesting and very scary look at the future. Very powerful words.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Interloper
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2 posted 2001-10-16 04:14 PM


I hope the future is not as you write, but nicely written, indeed

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Magnus
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3 posted 2001-10-16 04:22 PM


Very sobering....I too hope that our children
do not have to witness this during their
lifetime.

Sven
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4 posted 2001-10-16 07:35 PM


a look forward???  perhaps. . . but, let us pray not. . .

well-written. . .

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Tracey
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5 posted 2001-10-16 09:32 PM


Very interesting write. I often wonder when, if ever, we humans will learn to live together

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Enchantress
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6 posted 2001-10-16 09:36 PM


Interesting write....something to think about.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

jwesley
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7 posted 2001-10-16 10:49 PM


Definitely something to think about...gonna have to pass this to my son...think he'd like to read it too

jwesley

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