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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-10-16 01:55 PM



Enchanted Sleep….


Taken
to an
enchanted
sleep, in
midnight’s
silent dark,
soft breaths
tell of her
heart’s desires,
gently aroused
by her
spirit’s weave
through
a labyrinth
of yearning
for his familiar sigh
to once again
serenade her….

achildsheart
10-16-01

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-10-16 02:02 PM


And what a nice serenade that was

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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Member Patricius
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just out of reach
2 posted 2001-10-16 02:39 PM


Very well written! Makes me want to curl up under a soft blanket with my man........where is he anyway? lol. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

walker
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Florida
3 posted 2001-10-16 02:41 PM


I love serenates, great poem.
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2001-10-16 03:58 PM


a labyrinth
of yearning
for his familiar sigh
to once again
serenade her….
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Yes, lovely. Enjoyed this one. Now I could go for this as long as his serenade is not a snore.
~smiles Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

Startime
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5 posted 2001-10-16 04:00 PM


A gentle serenade filled with tenderness. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
6 posted 2001-10-17 10:42 AM


so glad everyone enjoyed this.

thanks for the great responses.

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

wayoutwalt
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7 posted 2001-10-17 04:09 PM


o yuh got me goin
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