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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Soft Communion Molten, forged, then heat denied, as at the anvil, time and pride hammered beauty into place as if both artisan and priest harbored much. And yet, to fear the thought, the sound of Grace at sea upon a woman's voice, Doubts. RMW [This message has been edited by RMW (edited 10-16-2001).] |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
When you write, perfection is all one ever sees... and you never disappoint. Never. |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Decaflame...thank you for the note of confidence. An interesting subject...the ordination of women. Happy to be able to share. Bob |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RMW, A mouth full said in a few words. enjoyed |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!A very powerful and thought provoking poem. Wonderful writing. Thank you for sharing it, with me. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed the read my friend. jwesley |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Molten, forged, then heat denied, as at the anvil, time and pride hammered beauty into place as if both artisan and priest harbored much. And yet, to fear the thought, the sound of Grace at sea upon a woman's voice, Doubts." This is POETRY!!!!! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely work, Bob. Cor |
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