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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-10-16 11:32 AM



Open to Love, Easily Broken…


To know me, look into my eyes
and find the many facets of my soul
reflected on the mirror inside of me.


Discover the child who loves to
giggle, pretend and play.
She does this for the child who is
afraid to sleep and cries alone in the dark.


Hear the woman with a song ever on her lips,
singing of love and romance.
The tempo of her heart, lyrics with regard to her passions,
all sung to calm the lonely cries of the woman
always searching for something more.


Recognize the woman standing in the midst of wild flowers.
She stands in beauty, for the woman who cowers in the corner,
hoping to chase away the ugliness that has put her there.


Know the woman who walks with the grace of a Grand Lady,
who possesses inside of her the heart of child.
Open to love, easily broken…  

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-10-16 11:55 AM


A Whisper's Caress,
A blue true, Enjoyed the read.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2001-10-16 12:00 PM


I love this dynamic duo...I think she may be my missing twin????
A Whisper's Caress
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3 posted 2001-10-16 12:47 PM


not that I put much belief in horoscopes,
but I do believe in astrology. I am a true gemini, through and through.
thanks for the replies.

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

jwesley
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4 posted 2001-10-16 01:19 PM


Very nice, my friend...enjoyed this much.

jwesley

Victoria
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5 posted 2001-10-16 11:37 PM


Beautifully written Annie..loved it..hugs

                          ~Victoria~

Duncan
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6 posted 2001-10-16 11:52 PM


Hear the woman with a song ever on her lips,
singing of love and romance.
The tempo of her heart, lyrics with regard to her passions,
all sung to calm the lonely cries of the woman
always searching for something more.

Thanks for explaining the Gemini connection.  Not much into astrology, either...but when it's fits, it fits well.  Very unique write.  Like it alot.

A Whisper's Caress
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7 posted 2001-10-17 10:41 AM


JWesley,

Thanks so much for the great response.


Victoria,  

Thanks, your feedback means alot.

Duncan,

This was never meant to define a gemini, but
more to define me. But being a true gemini, split personality, I geuss I have done both.

Thanks for the response, I do appreciate it.

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

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