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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Eternity's Horizon ~*Marge Tindal*~  I shall seek you on the sunrise in a thousand dancing rays Swirl of winging across the horizon of my days We shall meet as we have met another life ago On into the future with thoughts of you I go Circling back to where we've been What was ... is ... and will be again~ *Keeping a promise~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
You keep promises very well...oftentimes in the form of a gift of light.... as should be, for the Keeper of the Flame.... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* and what a special promise this is. Filled with love and romance. Absolutely beautiful. Again you light the skies with your work. I love it, Marge. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Your gift of matching text and visuals Marge is only surpassed by your Poetry. In fact Marge they merge very well. In Wales you would probably be called 'Marge the merge'  Stay warm and lets see even more Jon All these moments |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
ahhhh - this is so very nicely deep and full of promise. Just like you, Marge - except a great deal of your promise is realized every day, and there is such a font remaining! [This message has been edited by LngJhnAg (edited 10-16-2001).] |
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Kelley_Edwards Junior Member
since 2001-10-16
Posts 21USA |
It is important to always keep your promises and this one is a truly inspired declaration of doing just that. Nicely constructed!  |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Now...I really like this one Marge. Provokes many images. jwesley |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
What was, and is, and is to come. The promise of eternity included. Beautiful poem Marge. Hugs, Deb |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
promise has been kept beautiful lines draw pictures playing in the mind. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
so pretty Marge... Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
We shall meet as we have met another life ago On into the future with thoughts of you I go Circling back to where we've been What was ... is ... and will be again ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Oh Marge....this one did it for me!! Made my day! For this is exactly how I feel and believe. Thank you for this one! ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just beautiful as always Marge. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I particularly love the second verse... Oh, to have such a promise. *S* Beautiful! |
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Soaringeagle Member
since 2000-12-06
Posts 156CANADA |
OH MARGE THIS ONE IS AGAIN WELL WRITTEN WELL POLISHED WELL DONE such promise the glen the glen the glen when????? lovya maiden |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
This is exquisite.... -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A beautiful union of your words, wisdom, and art. A keeper for sure. ~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Across the planes of time, love always flows! |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Marge, This is beautiful!!  ~hugs~ Marie smiles ~Marie~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is lovely indeed. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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cottage Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 138 |
I really love this Marge ~ cottage |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautifully touching, Marge! Very well done! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
A beautiful promise....lovely Marge... Greeneyes~ *** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-16-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
What was ... is ... and will be again~ ========================= indeed ...indeed...... and you KNOW Im smiling at those words of wisdom... (seems Ive heard then somewhere before???)  ( must of been when sitting around the fire) *S* Beautiful poetic promise Margie...and we all know you make good on your word. Thank you for the emails... had comp problems since Sunday and couldnt do replies...so you gave me my poetry fix love ya girlie-girl  This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
REcycle me o yuh |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
As my friend would say - 'Merci'~ DecaFlame~ StarTime~ Jon~ Kelley~ JWesley~ BloomingRose~ InterLoper~ AWhispersCaress~ Enchantress~ Mysteria~ Martie~ SunshineMist~ Tracey~ Cottage~ Denise~ GreenEyes~ JanetMarie~ Walt~ Thank you ALL so much for enjoying the keeping of this promise~ SoaringEagle~ I smile in knowing that the 'glen' of our love and friendship is within our hearts~ Thank you, my friend ... always~ Love~  ~*Maiden*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
marge, a wonderful love poem! that picture fits perfectly |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful thoughts, sweet poetess A truly wonderful poem Liz |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well now ... this is a wonderful one to come in a see. You do promises so very well and so sweetly. Very nicely done and kept. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Eternity's horizon - ta tir na n-og, tir alainn trina cheile. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Don't know how I missed this one, but it is sure a beauty! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Chelsea~ Thank you so much~ Elizabeth~ Good to see you, sweetie. Glad you enjoyed it~ Maga~ Hugging the spirit of you that rolls in on distant thunder~ Gv ge yuhi~ Dee~ 'Ta tir na n-og, tir alainn trina cheile.' - The land of eternal youth, a beautiful land fluent within itself. Thank you for sharing that with me~ it is beautifully poetic~ Mysteria~ Thank you very much~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- YOU are a promise in yourself.. And THIS is simply a small piece of the promise that is YOU. Love you, sweet friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ I try to keep each promise that I make~ Thanks, sweetest friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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