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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast

0 posted 2001-10-16 12:59 PM




Sparkle

Ebony, amber eyes

as sun's rays
dancing upon
calm waters...

Shine

with warmth,
& tenderness
once given
to me freely
but now is cast
before the unappreciate
who neither earned
or deserve such beauty

Sparkle

ebony, amber eyes

let me see love
& vitality shine
inside you again,
if only just once more...


~Tier
4/00


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Heather Miller
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1 posted 2001-10-16 01:01 AM


~*~Beautiful~*~
Heather (CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

Sven
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2 posted 2001-10-16 01:04 AM


eyes shine better if they are looked upon. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tiersdin
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east coast
3 posted 2001-10-16 01:08 AM


Thank you, Heather... *smiles*

And I agree, Sven... so much better to peer into the eyes of a loved one... Thanks for commenting!

~Tier

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