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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast

0 posted 2001-10-15 09:55 PM


This little poem was inspired by Topheth's poem "Gives way". Hope you like it! *smiles*


One call
could mean my undoing
leave me breathless
& constantly cooing
deliriously serious
about hearing your voice
you've double-dared me
now I've no choice...

your number
please?
~Tier
10/01

© Copyright 2001 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-10-15 10:11 PM


Whoa Tier!  I dare ya!  Bet there are many a lady out here who would take him up on his offer huh?     ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
2 posted 2001-10-15 10:12 PM


Love this!!!  Love the title too!!!
Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364
east coast
3 posted 2001-10-15 10:33 PM


*Chuckles*  Well, Nancy, can't say that he's hard on the eye! *wink*  Thanks for the comment!

Thank you, Jwesley, the poem practically wrote itself after reading Topheth's words... Glad that you enjoyed it!

*smiles*

~Tier

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