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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-10-15 09:35 PM


You are the bird of my paradise
The wind beneath my wings
You are the colors of the rainbow
And all the different shades it brings

The light of my life
The spring in my step
The jewel in my crown
The paint in my palette

You are the river in my dreams
The burning embers in my fire
The whisper through the trees
You're the one my heart desires

You lift my spirits high
Whenever I'm feeling low
Many things you are to me
I just wanted you to know

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2001-10-15 10:44 PM


And sing it to him from the roof-tops Sue!!!This is a lovely poem to love. I'm sure he appreciates it

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Heather Miller
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since 2000-07-19
Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA
2 posted 2001-10-16 12:18 PM


VERY LOVELY  
Wonderful job of showing your love.
Heather (CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

The Lady of Shallot
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since 2001-10-03
Posts 818
USA
3 posted 2001-10-17 02:17 PM


What an elegance of emotion in these words. How wonderful to read someone feeling these things, expressing them so openly. Thank you for this.

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-
Anna

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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TEXAS (it's all big)
4 posted 2001-10-17 02:21 PM


if there's a person then they loved this o yuh o yuh!
BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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Florida
5 posted 2001-10-17 03:15 PM


Wow! This is nice. You've got that magic touch of pen going!

Deb

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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Ontario, CANADA
6 posted 2001-10-17 03:47 PM



  This is soft and simple, it's delightful!  Well expressed~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
7 posted 2001-10-17 04:26 PM


Enjoyed very much! Love sweet love!  ~Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

vandana
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8 posted 2001-10-17 06:22 PM


enjoy
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
9 posted 2001-10-17 11:22 PM


This sings of the wonderful love found in your heart. I love it. Your words are a delight to read.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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