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Grapes Fed By Two
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Grapes Fed By Two |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Stirring slightly, bodies awakening from sexually induced sleep. Sun rising slowly, a huge orangish yellow ball, nature’s alarm calls. Gulls flitting along the seashore, charging and retreating with each wave. An occasional early warrior attempting to catch his dream. Lights and sound of a distant train, climbing an invisible grade. Our lovers, lying side by side, molding into one. Bodies touching, sharing warmth along a winding torso trail. Breathing deeply with an occasional sigh, becoming restless. Hunger tapping an alarm bell, a sensual thought waits. Grapes, cool, fresh from the vine, fed delightfully in a teasing way. Slices of peach, covered with cream, mischievously placed between moist lips. Coffee, wafting invisibly up carpeted steps, silently entering a room. Four eyes, two hearts awaken to a new day, love’s spell binding. A delicate breakfast nook, carafe waiting to be drained. Hands touching across a short distance, breaking away. Each feeding the other, laughing with giggling, smiling eyes. Sharing a simple elegant feast remembered till eternal separation. Love flourishes amongst the shifting dunes. Two hearts grow fonder, two minds caring, becoming one. Two shadows never parting, ever sharing. Disappearing only upon the setting of a smiling sun. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi Magnus, I didn't say welcome to you yet did I? Well, now I do  I think you wrote a sweet loving verse here. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* My heart is melting from the sweet romance of this wonderful poem. Very well done, Magnus. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Titia....thank you....How is the Netherlands? I know it is beautiful.... BTW....I have about a dozen or so posts before this post that you would enjoy as well.... Thanks again for your kind words.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Startime...as always, your gracious reception of my poetry soothes my heart, means much. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Damn Magnus!! Sorry...But, you are so good! *sigh* but you must stop doing this to me!!...US!...the women of PiP. Oh, at least let me catch my breath in between will you? *sigh* Glorious!! Loved it...can't you tell?  ~Nancy~~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy.......here..... I write these words of tenderness of love for all that you give. I write these words or earnestness For your writing is why I live. I live and love so hard you see. My soul is filled with so much My words go on incessantly Your heart I wish to deeply touch. Smile, grin and bear it....cool down. More to follow. Magnus |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is a favorite of yours so far.....now if you do one with rain AND the ocean and loving...I'm done for..... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OH YES I WILLLLLLLLL. Writing it now.... Thanx Susan... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Magnus!! Please slow down!! I can't take anymore!! SEA...now you've done it!! He'll do another!~*sighing completely off the page*...Nancy~ |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
 OH MY UUUUUMMMMMMMM Well I don't know what to say This was REALLY good!!!! Heather (CherokeeGirl) Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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