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SEA
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0 posted 2001-10-15 04:53 PM



In my heart I found you
But it’s no great mystery
I’ve always known somehow
That you were a part of me

You were just waiting till I got there
Till I turned ‘round life’s bend
And ran into the one
I’d always call my friend

It’s funny how in that moment
That we both could recognize
It only took a second
To see that spark in your eyes

Mirroring the glimmer
That shone from inside of me
Oh yes, friends forever
We surely would be

Distance stands between us
Each with a hectic day to day
But in your heart you know
The words I’ll always say

Dear friend of mine, I love you
For all time….endlessly
Now and forever more
I remain yours…..Sue Bee


~SEA~
*for Todd*

"One of the hardest things in life is having words in your heart that you
can't utter". ~James Earl Jones

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Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-10-15 05:05 PM



A friend is more than just a thought
a friend is one for whom is bought
a card "just because" for two to share
a moment that comes, because one cares...

[This message has been edited by Lady In White (edited 10-15-2001).]

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2 posted 2001-10-15 05:05 PM


Aww, this is so heartfelt and loving.
Nicely written Susan

Maree  

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3 posted 2001-10-15 05:13 PM


Susan, as always you brought a smile to my face today!  You knew I would love this and I do.  Lovely, touching write.  ~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

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4 posted 2001-10-15 05:16 PM


Sea, a friend like that is a wonderful thing to have and you have put it into words so well.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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5 posted 2001-10-15 07:52 PM


SEA~
Heart words at their best~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2001-10-15 08:09 PM


Todd is a very lucky man to have such devotion and caring.  I envy him.  He'll love this, sweetie. (((hugs)))

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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7 posted 2001-10-15 08:13 PM


Susan,  beautifully written....I love your
style.  In some ways reminds me of my own.
A beautiful tribute to a friend.

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8 posted 2001-10-15 08:16 PM


LIW~ awww, thank you  

Maree~ that is sweet, thank you  

Nancy~ now you just put a smile on my face   thank you  

Dee~ he is awesome, I love and miss him every day   thank you  

Marge~ thank you  

Michael~ thank you, I feel lucky for having him in my life....even if it is only every once in a while...I still love him.   You are pretty special yourself   (((hugs))) to you  

~SEA

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9 posted 2001-10-15 08:18 PM


snuck in there Magnus  
thank you, that is quite a compliment  

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10 posted 2001-10-15 09:12 PM


SEA,

yes, you have a great
style, and this is so
sweet

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11 posted 2001-10-15 09:24 PM


Now this one gives me a Warm Fuzzy Feeling!

Enjoyed Muchly!

*smiles*

~Tier

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12 posted 2001-10-15 10:24 PM


Susan,


this was very touching and sincere.
a beautiful heartfelt write to a
apparently dear friend. You and Todd
are both very lucky to have one another.
Friendship is one of the most beautiful
and precious gifts of this world!!

Take care hon.
Amy  

"I could kiss you in
the rain forever.
Turn all of your pain to pleasure
Fill up your days with
sunlight, make the
passion last every night"

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13 posted 2001-10-15 10:41 PM


I was just down at the pub for a friends 50th birthday tonight. If I'd seen your poem before I went, I'd have asked if I could have read it for him. This is a lovely tribute to friendship. Beautiful Susan, just beautiful.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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