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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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0 posted 2001-10-15 03:00 PM



He said,
with you?
it's just a game
a test to
love you anyway
and I replied,
it's not the same?

Is it not so
with everyone?
I am not the only one...
are you not here
pleasing me?
you want me
to whisper your name...

and he looked down
at his notes
I told him
that was but scapegoat
avoidance
of the me in me...

He signed the chart
and set me free...

I grinned.
He signed.
Reluctantly...


*repost from Corner Pub for a friend*

© Copyright 2001 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
JulieAnn
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1 posted 2001-10-15 03:35 PM


Cool too cool...I liked it alot!!  J :0)

Just me BREAKING FREE of the manifestations of MAN, cut the cords one by one, finding no understanding except from the most divine one, it's happening

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since 2001-03-07
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2 posted 2001-10-15 03:40 PM


Ah but you make me smile so big sometimes, this was a cutie.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 2001-10-15 04:56 PM


Is it not so
with everyone?
I am not the only one...
are you not here
pleasing me?
you want me
to whisper your name...


Smiling at this one Karen  
I enjoyed.

Mare


Tracey
Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
4 posted 2001-10-15 11:37 PM


So.....does the shrink have to see a shrink now!!!!  

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

5 posted 2001-10-16 12:38 PM


I love shrinks...they're so easy to manipulate.  Ya did good!
wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
6 posted 2001-10-16 12:53 PM


i hate them shrinky dinks i do
rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
7 posted 2001-10-17 06:45 AM


And he just thought he had a degree! You teach em Serenity! Just make sure ya get the royalties from his book.  

Sincerely,
Regina

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