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Topheth
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0 posted 2001-10-15 01:51 PM




(Flowers lose their bloom.
Sun gives way to moon.)


Somehow I knew this could come true;
Your heart is all your own.
This is your choice; I heard your voice.
Some lives we live alone.
So as you will.  I love you still.
I hope you’ve always known.
Sometime from this, if you still wish,
just call me on the phone.


(Some are lost, some won.
Moon gives way to sun.)





[This message has been edited by Topheth (edited 10-15-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-10-15 01:54 PM


Geesh, If I were the person you are writing about, I would be dialing your number this very minute!!! Great. Chris

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Member Seraphic
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2 posted 2001-10-15 02:09 PM


this is wonderful Jeph......
*sigh*  

wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2001-10-15 02:23 PM


good job o yuh
Dee
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4 posted 2001-10-15 09:39 PM


I would if I knew your number  

Dee

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Tiersdin
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5 posted 2001-10-15 09:48 PM


Be careful what you might ask for!  

Loved this!

*smiles*

~Tier

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2001-10-15 09:53 PM


Is Texas long distance from Canada???  
*sigh* oh those darn big brown eyes!
Good write Jeph!  ~hugs. Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

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