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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-10-15 10:06 AM


So many flowers up
On top of the hill.
Usually sunflowers,
Like the year before.
Knowing they will rebloom
Inch by inch getting taller.
Saving all of these flowers
So I will have them all year.
Eventually the flowers will all
Die.
© By Sue 7/30/01

But, some will come back next year.

P.S. this was an acrostic challenge I did.

© Copyright 2001 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
1 posted 2001-10-15 10:09 AM


BRAVO!!!!Magnificent. I love it!!!Your words sing wonderfully.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
2 posted 2001-10-15 10:17 AM


Thank you, Startime.
sunshinemist
Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist
3 posted 2001-10-15 10:59 AM


Good challange and nicely done!  

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

rwood
Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
4 posted 2001-10-16 10:01 PM


This is clever and well done. I enjoyed the message.

Sincerely,
Regina

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
5 posted 2001-10-16 10:43 PM


Not sure about what an acrostic is (forget evertime I learn) but neat write, nice images too.

jwesley

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