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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-10-15 12:42 PM


The Starlight Cafe

The name was Starlight Cafe
The corner table we chose
Silver goblets,a carafe of wine
In your hand you held a rose

Placed the rose into my hand
To the corner we both glance
Piano playing love melodies
Embraced we began to dance

Swaying  close togetherness
My ears you nibble and bite
Stroked by your tender hands
Danced emblazoned in starlight

Stars shone through windows
Silver rays shone from above
We wined, dance and danced
Lips whispering words of love

Hope

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Duncan
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1 posted 2001-10-15 12:53 PM


Well, if that's not the perfect date...
You wrote it well.

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2 posted 2001-10-15 12:59 PM


Sounds like a lovely time at the Starlight Cafe! I liked this.
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3 posted 2001-10-15 01:37 AM


I think I need to go to that cafe. Is there an extra corner table????
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2001-10-15 05:37 AM


I'm going there as soon as you reveal the location...James
HopeS
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5 posted 2001-10-15 06:59 AM


James it in Perth Western Australia ,
it overlooks the ocean , a perfect way
to view the sunset
Hope

Tracey
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6 posted 2001-10-15 07:29 AM


If I should ever get to Australia, I'm searching out this cafe. You make it sound so beautiful

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Startime
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7 posted 2001-10-15 09:33 AM


*sigh* romantic perfection is pen in this vision of love. Hope, you weave love with such beauty making the heart yearn to have this kind of love in my life. Very well done. A romantic beginning to my day.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2001-10-15 01:21 PM


Hope~
Such a lovely romantic write~
*sigh* ... beautifully done~
*hugs*
~*Marge*~

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The Lady of Shallot
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9 posted 2001-10-15 01:46 PM


visual images were wonderful on this!

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10 posted 2001-10-15 02:08 PM


Dear Hope - this is as graceful as a waltz. I like it!! Chris

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11 posted 2001-10-15 02:21 PM


it is a nice thought o yuh
Dee
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12 posted 2001-10-15 05:46 PM


Hope, I don't remember this cafe from when I was in Perth. I will have to look for it next time I am over there. You have made me want to visit again.

Dee

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