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Shutting the Door Behind You
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Shutting the Door Behind You |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Not too much time, No. Not much now. So now, we laugh at everything. Everytime, we hug goodbye, we study eyes in dirge's sing and smile them into lullabyes. This may be the last we touch-- this, this thing, we don't discuss. This may be the last goodbye. So let us laugh--Enough of Cry! Let's just talk about the day... "normal"-keep the 'strange' at bay. I hate to shut the door behind - reluctant twist of wrist in wind. I hate to turn and lock the screen. These days I hate most everything. I do not want to be so strong. I want home. And home? Is gone... And every word I yearn to say, abandons me- I whisper "hey" My Dad--returning gaze to me, sad eyes in apology, I, in him, and him in me... and HE tells ME--to be strong. *repost for my Dad...and for myself...miss you Dad.* |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
((warm hugs)) I am sorry to hear about your dad. Know that he is now an angel that watches over you from above! best wishes RosePetal |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, this is so touching and beautiful and painful to read. Yes, he lives in you, and as trite as it sounds, I am sure that he is in heaven smiling down and kissing your cheek as we speak!  Although, each case is different, this reminds me of what I went through with my Gramdma's last months. Will a hug help you? I hope so, I am very sorry...I wish that I could say more. Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Here listening. Hugs you, and may he rest. *Peace to you both. (This is clinging to my heart). |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh K, this is so heartwrenching. He is right beside you hon. hugs always Maree |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~sighing~..and it will always be that..."missing him" but you know what..I talk to mine all the time...and I know he hears me... ((hugss)) ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yes... these words.... very nicely done...and I am sure he feels the same way... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* heartbreakingly beautiful. I am sure he feels what your heart says to him. This brings tears to my heart for your loss and loneliness. *BIG HUGS* Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ I understand the need~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
serenity...I know how it feels, and understand. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
And every word I yearn to say, abandons me- I whisper "hey" My Dad--returning gaze to me, sad eyes in apology, I, in him, and him in me... and HE tells ME--to be strong. SerenitySweetie, this has got to be THE MOST heart-embracing poem I've ever read by you and gosh, I cannot hold back the tears in my eyes as your poem purely touched my soul... Your writing is exceptional! Hugs2uAlways *~coco~* |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oopsie I apologize for double post but I really must put this into my library folder... Muahhh on cheekz2UsweetPoetSerenity *~coco~* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
O Serene One, (((hugs))) to you, Regards, Sudhir |
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