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Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-10-14 07:55 PM

The stillness of a cool night beneath a moons soft light.
Laughter intermixed with giggles heard from afar.
A single light shining from a distant window.
Silhouettes of love cavorting and passing through.
Love’s dance of the ages begins anew for two.

Two becoming one image against a softly lit backdrop.
Lips touching for centuries, slowly parting as tongues trail.
Soft touches departing from shadows, becoming two again.
An endless dance with silent music performed freely.

Dashing outside into the stillness, breath frosting.
Flushed faces filled with anticipation, waiting to be.
Soft whispers calling, awaiting a response, impatiently.
Shadows diffuse and become one among a star filled sky.

Soft moans, giggles, dashing too and fro, hiding.
Running excitedly away as butterflies, not a care.
Falling softly into mown hay, freshness abounds.
Clasping hands in passions embrace, shuddering.

Love under a moon filled sky, a smiling moon sighs

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-14 08:04 PM

*sigh* romance filled with tenderness and play. How much better could it be? Oh well done. You sure know how to make hearts flutter. I LOVE IT!!!.....as will all the ladies who read it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-10-14 08:06 PM

and listens to words of love. . .

this is very well done. . . I really like the way that you've set this scene. . . not too overdone, letting us fill in the details. . . that's when it's the best. . .

great job. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-10-14 08:09 PM

Soft moans, giggles, dashing too and fro, hiding.
Running excitedly away as butterflies, not a care.
Falling softly into mown hay, freshness abounds.
Clasping hands in passions embrace, shuddering.

Love under a moon filled sky, a smiling moon sighs
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*sigh* Not just the moon you have sighing here dear Magnus!! How you do make the 'ladies of passions' swoon!
Lovely, exciting, enjoyed very much!

~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-10-14 08:28 PM

Thanx Star....happy to share a short one
that is a favorite to me.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

5 posted 2001-10-14 08:29 PM

Sven....I like a poem to be delicate but
captivating. I love to write this style.
And I love when someone else feels I have
done a good job of what I have written,
for that inspires me to write more. Thank
You for your great words.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-10-14 08:31 PM

Magnus~
One of my favorite poetic subjects ...
the moon with her magnetism~
Nicely done~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-10-14 08:31 PM

Thanx Nancy....I am pleased that you have
enjoyed my romance poetry....This will
inspire me to continue on, and so I shall.
Thanx again...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2001-10-14 08:33 PM

Thanx Marg. Yes, the moon is such an
object of so many lovers and poets as well.
Certainly does get my attention too.
Thank you for commenting.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2001-10-14 09:44 PM

(sigh) Oooohhhhhh, this is so so beautifully romantic! (smiles) My heart fluttered daydreaming of the sweet smiling moon blushing in the happiness of two destined lovers! (big hugggsssssss) Ooohhhhh...you write sweet romance so so well, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, dearest Magnus, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2001-10-14 09:51 PM

Oh Magnus, how romantic especially after a long, rain-filled day. Wonderful. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2001-10-14 09:52 PM

thanx Mistletoe....

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-10-14 09:53 PM

Mine was rainy too....this helped my day as
well. Thanx for the words....

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

13 posted 2001-10-14 11:02 PM

Magnus~ your poetry is consistently beautiful and plays on my heart so gently

I really am enjoying reading your treasures

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

14 posted 2001-10-15 12:03 PM

OMG! THIS IS WONDERFUL! BEAUTIFUL! DELICIOUSLY ROMANTICALLY CAPTIVATING! Umm..sorry..I just don't have the right words. I love this!

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

15 posted 2001-10-15 06:49 PM

If I may, I will echo Tempress about this one. This should be read again.

I am many.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

16 posted 2001-10-15 07:17 PM

Susan....obviously I have your attention
with these words I love to share. Thanx
for all of your SUPER remarks....I love
them. Inspires me.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

17 posted 2001-10-15 07:18 PM

Temptress...I love that name....wish I knew
your real name...what you like to be known
as...IF this...that is OK....Thanx for that
MAGNANIMOUS salutation....you too inspire
this poet to write again.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

18 posted 2001-10-15 07:20 PM

Siofra....what a mysterious name....I could
use that in a poem.....thanx for the
wonderfully great remarks....

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

19 posted 2001-10-15 09:17 PM

Love under a moon filled sky, a smiling moon sighs

....and so do I.

Dee

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

20 posted 2001-10-15 09:23 PM

Thanx Dee....I too sigh sometimes when I read
and let my mind inside the poem....thank you
very much for your words..

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