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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Be my ocean roll over me kiss sandy shores unhurried, yet purposeful teasing retreating only to return with greater desire ebb, flow penetrating defences with gently rolling licks of refined passion what else could I do but surrender unto the beauty of nature? ~Tier 10/01 [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 10-14-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
in that surrender, may the ocean know the shore and may the waves find that which they have sought. . . sorry Tier. . . just seemed to fit my feelings about this one. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
beauty is found here |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A feeling of sensual beauty flows with each wave as the words wash over your reader. Magnificent. I love it. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
the first 3 lines are my FAVORITE!! Well done T |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Nature strikes the core of passionate living by the lush tone of your words. Willie B |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
deserves a title don't you think? nice to see you back.... hope all is well with you. |
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