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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2001-10-14 01:45 PM



Somewhere, someplace
that opposites meet &
day bends into night
one yearns for
the greatest
invention
since
love,

You...


~Tier

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 10-14-2001).]

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Duncan
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1 posted 2001-10-14 02:04 PM


the greatest
invention
since
love,

You...

There are some people who seem to us made especially for our love.  Great write, Tiersdin and cool title.

Sven
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2 posted 2001-10-14 02:19 PM


the one thing that can never be improved upon. . .

beautiful Tier. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Startime
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3 posted 2001-10-14 07:36 PM


*sigh* magnificent in its message. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Logan
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4 posted 2001-10-14 07:44 PM


Words few, words sweet, words reflective..who could ask for more..very gentle smile..wonderful write, Tier
Tiersdin
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5 posted 2001-10-15 07:14 PM


Duncan, Sven, startime{love that name!}, & Logan... thank you so much for your kind and encouraging comments!

*hugs* to you all...

*smiles*

~Tier

Tracey
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6 posted 2001-10-15 11:25 PM


Ah.....yes, this is just lovely. And I agree with Duncan...cool title

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2001-10-15 11:35 PM


Applause, applause!
Tiersdin
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8 posted 2001-10-16 01:02 AM


Thank you, Tracey and Midnitesun, I'm glad you liked!

*smiles*

~Tier

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