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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-10-14 07:34 AM



                                               The beginnings….

                                                dreams
                                                  are silver spun
                                                     silken threads finding a
                                                golden breath of wind
                                                  nourished by showers, soon
                                                      following sun’s rainbows
                                                and glimmering under the
                                                      gift of stars

                                                until a
                                                  destination
                                                      embraces them
                                                bringing them to the ground
                                                  where they fall onto
                                                     themselves
                                                becoming a foundation
                                                  from which they will
                                                     grow
                                                                               skyward



© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-14 07:48 AM


This is beautiful....a great depiction of
dreams....and what they are.   True,  
others would write differently of them, but
that is what makes us so unique.  I like
this poem Sunshine.

Nan
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2 posted 2001-10-14 08:18 AM


OH yeah - I think I'll plant myself a dream and water it till it sprouts, touches the sky, and blooms gloriously...
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3 posted 2001-10-14 08:24 AM


Love the softness...
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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4 posted 2001-10-14 08:26 AM


Karilea~
Yes ... indeedy~
This is such an offering of hope and desire to see our dreams grow~
Lovely thoughts~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-10-14 10:49 AM



                                                until a
                                                  destination
                                                      embraces them


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simply profound ...  simply Sunshine ... Sunday's shine

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

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6 posted 2001-10-14 10:52 AM


So many dreams aren't remembered, to many unforgotten, all inspire. Enjoyed.
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7 posted 2001-10-14 11:47 AM


Now THIS brought my first HUGE smile for the day.   Thank you for such beautiful work to start my day! I love this!

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

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8 posted 2001-10-14 12:08 PM


*sigh* dreams......the inner part of us. Holding our deepest hopes and desires. I wonder if dreams can ever become reality or if they are ever lost in the weaving we give them. BRAVO!!!A masterpiece is this poem.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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9 posted 2001-10-14 12:13 PM


Karilea--What a wonderful way to see, with your eyes!
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10 posted 2001-10-14 02:37 PM


growing. . . and reaching. . .

wonderful my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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