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Sunshine
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0 posted 2001-10-14 07:10 AM


Sunday Morning

have but a child’s faith
see Me then through their eye’s light
trust shall come again

find Me in your child
place your heart in their youth’s blessing
faith shall come again

as a child may fall
undaunted, he stands again
to go forth once more

see love in your child
seek in your children’s laughter
love of life in Me


© Copyright 2001 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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1 posted 2001-10-14 07:20 AM


I often watch the children,
There joy of just being,
Despite the external situations and traumas.

Very nicely written
enjoyed the format as well as the subject.

Gloom

Nan
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2 posted 2001-10-14 07:59 AM


Sweet innocence... with a lifetime in abeyance... What a lovely Sunday morning greeting..
Kit McCallum
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3 posted 2001-10-14 08:03 AM


What a perfect grouping of verse to greet a Sunday morn, Sunshine. Thank you for these tender lines of wisdom and hope.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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4 posted 2001-10-14 10:47 AM


I love starting my Sunday morning with the sweet innocence of this beautiful poem. Thank you so much, Sunshine, for sharing this with me today.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

The Lady of Shallot
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5 posted 2001-10-14 08:47 PM


You always shine, your heart always shines!



-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

[This message has been edited by The Lady of Shallot (edited 10-14-2001).]

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6 posted 2001-10-14 08:57 PM


Most definitely a wonderful thing to have
in a child's life....Oh so important.
This poem says it well.

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7 posted 2001-10-14 09:31 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Karilea, this is sooooooo beautiful and touching, I found myself crying near the end of it, thinking of a child's smile! (sigh) To have faith in and love a child is the most beautiful gift they could ever ask for, and such a love makes them feel so special! (smiles) I love children so so much, and when I grow up I want to be a special teacher for children. (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, here's a special kiss on your cheek! (muah) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet sunshine, thank you for sharing!

My love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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