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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-10-13 08:24 PM



Gentle is the first kiss
you give
Telling me
how much
I've been missed
Soft and tender
but deep
is your second kiss
espressing how you want me
The third is passionate
searching eagerly
to my responces
In your arms then
I lose count
of your kisses
Wanting more of you
with every kiss
you give.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-10-13 08:30 PM


*sigh* oh yes...lovely.  Very well said indeed.  ~NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

Startime
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
2 posted 2001-10-13 09:09 PM


*sigh* a endless number of kisses...each one better than the last. Now this is a poem that makes me want to be kissed. Wonderful. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218

3 posted 2001-10-13 09:23 PM


This was a good read!!!!!!!!
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