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Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2001-10-13 04:47 PM

Open Your Eyes
By: Noah Eaton
9/26/01

Open your eyes
Show your world to me
Take me by suprise
With arms open welcomingly

Shout my name
Meet me here in gaiety
I'll relieve your pain
I'll kiss you tenderly

Angels put stars in the sky
For both our faithful vows
Let's have the time of our lives
For your heart I've found

In this swaying vale
I sing this pastoral dream
To fall into your arms and sail
Away with you into infinite harmony...

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-13 05:23 PM

Beautifully romantic, Noah. Your pen is flowing with love.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.
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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-10-13 05:35 PM

Noah,
Enjoyed the read.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2001-10-13 06:28 PM

Noah, this is so soft, whimsical and romantic, of course, I love it!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

4 posted 2001-10-13 06:40 PM

Very romantic! Enjoyed.

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2001-10-13 07:46 PM

This flows so nicely...

'In this swaying vale
I sing this pastoral dream
To fall into your arms and sail
Away with you into infinite harmony...'

How romantic and tender.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

6 posted 2001-10-14 12:11 PM

Ah, this is indeed lovely. Such love pouring out of your pen

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-10-14 12:29 PM

Well that sounded like real fun! I enjoyed this one Noah.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

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