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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2001-10-13 03:38 PM



Sneak'n  In
~~~


The  house  was  dark  and  silent
out  late
one  friday  night
~
Tiptoed  in
and  shut  the  door
Thank  god  the  dog  stayed  quiet
~
I  crept  the  stairs
my  shoes  in  hand
A  key  dropped ... with  a  ring
~
I  saw  my  wife
a  flight  above
Doing  the  same  dam  thing
~~~


© Copyright 2001 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-10-13 03:40 PM


*giggling* I love it!!!!I love it!!!You gave me a wonderful laugh and for that I am very greatful. I will be looking for more of your work.
Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-10-13 03:45 PM



Hey!  Didn't you two just celebrate an anniversary?  And you're both out and about again?

This was cute! Thanks for the giggle!

serenity blaze
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3 posted 2001-10-13 03:55 PM


grinning...reminds me of that famous song...

"Who's making love to your old lady, while you were out making love?"

Good to see the merry mad poet back again!

Snoopy hugs to you, my friend!  

Nan
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4 posted 2001-10-13 07:32 PM


Still sneakin'
Still amusin'
Still one darn good poet...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2001-10-13 07:39 PM


Good one Rex!!!  I love it!     Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

The Lady of Shallot
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6 posted 2001-10-13 08:11 PM


Big smile here......thank you!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Tracey
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7 posted 2001-10-13 11:56 PM


ROFLMAO. This is amazingly cute and clever. I actually laughed out loud when I got to the end. Great write

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Tennessee Angel
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8 posted 2001-10-14 12:00 PM


Oh my goodness!  That is just too funny.  I never saw it coming.  Great job.  :-)
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9 posted 2001-10-14 12:00 PM


I'm with Tracey on this one, on the floor laughing. Why you rascal you! not to mention your equally rascally wife. You must have a warm,lovingly funny, secure relationship.
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
10 posted 2001-10-14 02:23 AM


Startime ... happy I could make you laugh

Sunshine ... It's her fault ... I never do anything wrong

serenity ... as Woodstock once said
"*@%!"
Thankyou

Thankyou Nan ... you're a treasure

Enchantress ... thankyou Nancy, glad you liked it

The Lady of Shallot ...Thankyou

Tracey ... so you have a funny bone eh?

Tennessee Angel ... You may see a few more of these in the near future

Midnitesun ... you bet ... thanks

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