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0 posted 2001-10-13 03:23 PM


Strawberry Beret
By: Noah Eaton
10/13/01

When the first man and woman met
Living happily for many star-studded years
There came a time when they began to quarrel
Until the day the wife ran away east into the frontier

Her husband begged her to come back, but she strided further
Leaving the man lonely in his grief
Watching her raven black hair brush against the east Nundagunyi sun
Beginning to fall behind the prairie

Then the glum husband felt a warm hand caress his back
It was Unelanunhi, the Apportioner, who controlled the sun
He asked him if he was still angry about his wife
And he said, "No, I love her with all my heart, she is the one!"

Begging to have her back, the great Unelanunhi rose to the sky
Growing huckleberry patches in front of the woman he missed
But she went on, ignoring them, and the sun raised a crop of blackberries
Still not driven by their temptation, she went on to resist

Unelanunhi tried again and again, still not stopping her
Until finally, he grew a field of lush ruby strawberries
Curious in the beauty of this fruit, she kneeled down and picked some
Tasting the sweetness of them, she turned her head to the west coterie

She thought of the romantic times she had with her husband
Sitting down to think it over, the desire of coming back to him increased
Finally making up her mind, she picked up her dress and held it like a basket
Scooping as many berries as she could, and running back home to him merrily

And she kissed him on the lips, and he forgave her for what went wrong
She too said she was sorry, and they placed the strawberries in a wicker case
As Unelanunhi slowly sank behind the valley, peeking with a smile
Wishing this married couple good luck and to be happy the rest of their days...

(Based on a real Cherokee tale)

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-13 03:51 PM


Noah...thank you for sharing this. I collect such tales, yanno!   So into the library it goes...a wonderful saga....absolutely RIPE with images.   (sorry, I am an incurable punster!)
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2 posted 2001-10-13 03:52 PM


sigh...I am an incurable punster with a very BAD memory... (forgot to add to my library) grin...and "click"
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