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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-10-13 03:22 PM



                 Oh romantic poet
                 whose words do flow with pen,
                 You make the ladies love you
                 just to sigh again.

                 Your words stir the emotions
                 deep within the mind,
                 healing wounded souls
                 in each romantically written line.

                 Those romantic words
                 that touch deep within the heart,
                 often times your words do make
                 the gentle teardrops start.

                 Oh romantic poet
                 writing love songs sweet and true,
                 capturing the heart of a romantic poetess
                 just like me, oh poet... you do.



On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 10-13-2001).]

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Startime
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1 posted 2001-10-13 03:28 PM


Words of love they all pen
touching our gentle hearts
wishing for love again
woven by their arts

A wonderful tribute to the special hearts that men of poetry have. I am sure they will all be touched by your words. *sigh* Poets are truly wonderful men indeed for they feel deeply from within a beating heart. Thank you so much for sharing the beauty of your words with me.

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2 posted 2001-10-13 03:59 PM



The men shall surely come along with their thanks...another fine job, this one!

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-10-13 04:18 PM


I enjoy writing of romantic times...thank you gentle one...James
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4 posted 2001-10-13 05:28 PM


Yes..they do.   This is a beautiful way to keep them in our minds.  

Sometimes the heart needs the solace of solitude and silence.

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5 posted 2001-10-13 05:34 PM




(kiss on cheek) Oh Gentle Spirit, you're just so cute, we all love you so much! (big hugggsssssss) Your beautiful words of love always touch my heart, just as they do to us all! (smiles) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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6 posted 2001-10-13 05:37 PM


Gentle,
Cute and sweet, enjoyed

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7 posted 2001-10-13 06:24 PM


There is nothing to compare the love words written by the poet! Nice one, enjoyed.  

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

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8 posted 2001-10-13 06:26 PM



Indeed, they do    Well expressed.  This makes me think of the poetry by Sven, Bill Charles and Mark Bohannan~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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9 posted 2001-10-13 07:02 PM


this is wonderful GS. . . and I'm sure that more of my fellow poets will agree!!

we are indeed humbled by your words. . . and say, "thank you. . . "  

-------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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10 posted 2001-10-13 07:35 PM


Many male poets here at Passions have made me *swoon* and *melt* or *shed a tear*...and, they sure know how to sweep a woman off her feet!
~Hugs to all the male poets out here! Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

doreen peri
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11 posted 2001-10-13 07:37 PM


wonderfully written......

i LOVE the passionatepoetMen here....

thank you for this

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12 posted 2001-10-13 11:47 PM


I agree. When I read the poetry here, I get a really good feeling about....REAL MEN. How come none of you are wandering the streets when I'm out searching????
A good poem, Gentle Spirit, for our exceptional men. And you have to share!!!

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13 posted 2001-10-14 12:02 PM


A lovely tribute to all our males poets here. I join you in your thanks to them. I must admit, I too have swooned at some of their words. I could almost develop a crush when I read the words of you most amazing fellas

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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14 posted 2001-10-14 01:29 AM


I am so happy that we have such passionate, romantic men poets on here! They definitely make us smile and swoon..

Keep it up Guys!! Us women truely appreciate you for being able to express your innermost feelings so magically!

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15 posted 2001-10-14 02:18 AM


What lovely words to say, but to speak for me alone, I will have to say, I fall very short of the haunting words you ladies keep coming up with..very gentle smile
Gentle Spirit
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16 posted 2001-10-15 11:36 AM


Each one touches us in their own special way, and I would like to take this opportunity to say to them......
THANK YOU.......*s*
Hugs and peace to all.  
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

sigheyes
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17 posted 2001-10-15 12:42 PM


I too have swooned, many times!  Great tribute to so many talented men!
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18 posted 2001-10-15 01:32 PM


Wow!  Wonderful stuff here.  Those men should be humbled.
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19 posted 2001-10-15 01:38 PM


Romance was created for women, it is our pleasure to occasionally be it's vehicle.
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20 posted 2001-10-15 06:10 PM


Gentle Spirit, this is a lovely tribute to deserving men. They know just what to say to make a woman melt.  

And Topheth, what do you mean "those men"? You, I am sure, are included in this.  

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

sigheyes
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21 posted 2001-10-15 10:22 PM


I agree with Dee, I am sure he is included in this.  I just needed to put this in the library, I forgot!
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22 posted 2001-10-15 10:31 PM


Our words flow from our hearts you see
and land on these pages we share.
For it is our true  feelings of thee
that we express to each of whom we care.

You, the ladies of our lives are here
amongst us on each passion posted page.
We love you each,  you are truly dear.
We are your knight,  your humble sage.

Thank you ladies.....most humbly.

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23 posted 2001-10-16 12:14 PM


I agree this is a wonderful tribute to all these men that sweep us off our feet or tug at our souls.


(Do you men give classes for the husbands of ours that don't have a romantic bone in their body? Ok maybe one or two romantic bones, but anyway where & when are the classes held)

Heather (CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

Kit McCallum
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24 posted 2001-10-16 08:16 AM


A beautiful tribute to the wonderfully passionate men of Passions! (and if they do start a class ... can I sign someone up too? LOL) Much enjoyed Gentle spirit!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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25 posted 2001-10-16 08:58 AM


Very good. And, it is so true. A very nice tribute to the men.
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26 posted 2001-10-16 08:59 AM


I agree with Kit - but what about us poor old kitty kickers?  Don't "we" make your heart do things, too?  *hopeful eyes*
Gentle Spirit
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27 posted 2001-10-16 12:47 PM



You are all so
wonderful and I thank
you all for the chance
to pay tribute to all of
the fine poets of our
own Passions!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

jwesley
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28 posted 2001-10-16 01:41 PM


I try, but then I read words like this by the likes of you and all the words I write are naught again...

Loved this...


jwesley

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29 posted 2001-10-16 01:47 PM


J, I have read your words and naught they are not!!  They too are beautiful.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 10-16-2001).]

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30 posted 2001-10-16 02:01 PM


hmmmm - I'm sure it was an innocent oversight, but I notice you failed to mention anything about kicking kitties in this poem.  Other than that, this is a very nice tribute to me...errr... to us men.
Gentle Spirit
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31 posted 2001-10-16 02:03 PM


Awww now LJ, you know that you are an IMPORTANT part of the wonderful group of poets here!  I didn't mean to oversight that at all!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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32 posted 2001-10-16 02:07 PM


how sweet of you dear
to compliment the men here
you are without peer

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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33 posted 2001-10-17 12:12 PM


Credit should not be for us men, but for the women that inspire us to write. Because without you the words would probably be about sports.  
So lets hear it for all the wonderful women out there too..... cause our words would be for nought if not for you.

Parker

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34 posted 2001-10-17 12:38 PM


Oh, and may this thread that binds us all together never be broken. And of course, Parker is right. (Sports....boring usually. Except I have to admit I watch FSU Seminoles at least once a year.)
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35 posted 2001-10-17 12:47 PM


LngJhn---Real men don't need to kick kitties.  Just kidding, buddy, don't kick me, ok?
Parker---Amen...we would be nothing without those our words adorn.
Gentle Spirit---Thanks, again.  Sorry I'm answering your post as if it were my own.

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36 posted 2001-10-17 05:57 AM


I know the saying that actions speak louder than words....but I feel that words of poetic love bring a great beat to the heart. They take on a special action in verse. I so agree with your lovely poem.

Sincerely,
Regina

Mark Bohannan
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37 posted 2001-10-17 01:18 PM


Well, I couldn't pass this up without saying thank you as one of the guys but as Parker pointed out ... there wouldn't those love poems if not for all those wonderful women that inspire us so thank you twice.  Wonderful piece of appreciation and written quite well.
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38 posted 2001-10-17 01:24 PM


I am humbled by everyones words.  I thank you all, we have the greatest group of talent here with our poets and poetess's.  I just wanted to pay tribute to them both.  Hugs and peace to all.
Donna

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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39 posted 2001-10-17 01:44 PM


words penned
lead us down paths
to hearts unexplored
so does the ink
lend itself to those
whose veins lie quilled
in open overexpose

What words for Love
from hands such as these
can grace the thoughts
or dream of touching souls

I would bow instead
to poetess refined
who in words so devine does
call from heaven
the fall of sun
the drip of moon

She who lives
rythms tied to life
says so much more
than man


Gentle Spirit
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40 posted 2001-10-17 02:03 PM


Now this is incredible Cpat, and I for one think should be posted for all to see!  Thank you........HUGS

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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41 posted 2001-10-17 07:36 PM


I don't think that the guys or gals of passions give themselves near enough of credit, so..........perhaps a bump back to the top to let them all know how much they are appreciated.  Bump.  
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42 posted 2001-10-18 04:26 PM


What would we do without them ? ha...lovely Donna..

                        ~Victoria~

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43 posted 2001-10-18 05:23 PM


SE, thank you.

Victoria, sometimes I wonder that myself!!
Thanks.  They are wonderful.  *s*

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44 posted 2001-10-19 07:05 PM


A lovely tribute to our passionate men! and indeed what would we do without them!

Enjoyed this very much.

Maree  


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45 posted 2001-10-22 12:00 PM


DA, thank you.  yes they are all that and more!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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46 posted 2001-10-22 09:18 PM


Have to agree with every word in this lovely poem.
Sandra

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47 posted 2001-10-22 10:00 PM


Thank you Sandra.  We have a wonderful group here.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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48 posted 2001-10-23 01:39 AM


Gentle Spirit,
I can see it's time to give up the poetry about my childhood. Wish me luck! It doesn't look easy.  
Well it's out there and called "Finally, Love!

[This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 10-23-2001).]

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49 posted 2001-10-23 08:07 AM


I will be sure to look it up, but don't quit writing of childhood days though.  There are to many memories held there.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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50 posted 2001-10-23 12:54 PM


I wanna be a romantic writer, too!!  
Gentle Spirit
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51 posted 2001-10-23 01:17 PM


oh dear DEER, me thinks you already are!!!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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52 posted 2001-10-23 03:00 PM


how in the world did I miss this one!!!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Gentle Spirit
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53 posted 2001-10-23 03:07 PM


sometimes these just move so fast!!  I hope you didn't miss the one for the ladies too!
Thanks for peaking in.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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54 posted 2001-10-23 05:22 PM


Donna,

How could we write romantic poetry if it were not for the lovely ladies that inspire our work?  The many, many wonderful women at this forum deserve our thanks and appreciation.  I thank each one of you, for you deserve the credit.  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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