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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-10-13 09:48 AM

The Web

I happened upon a remarkable sight
A glittering web in the dawn’s subtle light
Each thread was a masterpiece woven with grace
To make up an intricate pattern of lace

It shimmered with dew drops, the tears of the night
And glowed in the sun’s early radiance of light
So fragile, yet spun to the edge of allure
Attracting the curious eye to it’s door

Each silvery twine interlaced to the whole
Each ribbon embracing the heart and the soul
Each poet a beautiful thread of delight
As part of a truly remarkable site

Elizabeth Santos

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2001-10-13 09:51 AM

This is lovely, Elizabeth! You've spun a real beauty here! But then you always do!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-10-13 09:52 AM

This sparkles!

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-10-13 11:18 AM

Elizabeth,
Your poetry is remarkable. I never tire of reading it. Sy

The Lady of Shallot
Senior Member

since 2001-10-03

Posts 818
USA

4 posted 2001-10-13 12:36 PM

If I were browsing in a book store, came upon a book of poems by Elizabeth Santos, I would quickly purchase it!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-10-13 08:49 PM

this is beautiful my friend. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2001-10-13 09:08 PM

Lovely poetic weaving, Liz!

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

7 posted 2001-10-13 09:14 PM

This is very good.

Balladeer

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-05

Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

8 posted 2001-10-13 10:05 PM

...and you are the main spider-lady in this remarkable web, Elizabeth

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

9 posted 2001-10-13 10:08 PM

*sigh* and each poet spinning their own thread that brings them all together into the most beautiful web there ever was. I love this poem. It is perfect and so beautiful is the vision you create with it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-10-13 10:16 PM

Beautifully written...excellent description.
I like this.

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