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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-10-12 06:21 PM


The light shining in your eyes
Reveals the brightest shade of blue
How many times we've walked these sands
Arm in arm just me and you

Two lovers by the seashore
Who have thrown caution to the wind
Within each others hearts is where
Our hopes and dreams are pinned

You hold my hands so delicately
As our fingers interlace
Then you move your lips to mine
And kiss me tenderly on the face

Using an old piece of driftwood
We trace a heart here in the sand
As the warming Summer's breeze
Makes its way across the land

You whisper the words 'I love you'
As we gaze on out to sea
Within the safety of your loving arms
Is where I'll always want to be

'tho the tide will soon erase
Our footprints in the sand
My love for you grows stronger
As our hearts now take command

The light of the day is now fading
As the gulls fly towards the sun
Under the light of the silvery moon
Is where our two hearts will become one

Suetang

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1 posted 2001-10-12 06:32 PM


"You whisper the words 'I love you'
As we gaze on out to sea
Within the safety of your loving arms
Is where I'll always want to be"



Sue, this is wonderful!!  

Honeybee
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2 posted 2001-10-12 09:28 PM


Sue~

This is very lovely and soft!  
Gosh, I adore romantic verse, and you write it well!  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-10-12 09:35 PM


Sue, THIS is so very beautiful.  Great write.  I love it!!      ~NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

Elizabeth
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4 posted 2001-10-12 10:16 PM


What a beautiful picture of love you have here.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

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