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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-10-12 05:10 PM



Wishing Wells…

Her heart
warmed by
gathered thoughts
of sleepy hollow dreams
she strolls parkside on
a cool autumn morn
burying her hands
into deep pockets
with a shudder of remorse
for having tossed
her heart’s wishes
in the well
of his allure…

achildsheart
10-12-01

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

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MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2001-10-12 06:08 PM


Lessons -- not regrets.

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..."  --THE MATRIX

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-10-12 06:17 PM


for having tossed
her heart’s wishes
in the well
of his allure…
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Oh my!!  You know how I love these romantic ones!! Good write, enjoyed!  
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

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3 posted 2001-10-12 08:51 PM


but remembering. . . always remembering. . .

well done. . .  

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just out of reach
4 posted 2001-10-12 09:17 PM


Simply grand. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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5 posted 2001-10-12 09:20 PM


let the regrets become wisdom,  allowing
yourself to become stronger.  A nicely
reflective piece.

Duncan
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6 posted 2001-10-13 01:23 AM


Ahhh, but who can resist a wishing well?  Love the images of this.    
A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
7 posted 2001-10-14 09:55 AM


everyone, thank you for the wonderful remarks.
  

Duncan, haha I lately seem unable to resist ANYTHING.....
thanks for the comments.

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

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