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The Craving
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The Craving |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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The Craving You asked me for it sweetly at first Then you became quite insistent. You described it in succulent detail. Firm on the outside warm and creamy in the middle. I hesitated - You salivated. Gradually I gave in to your wanton desire. Positioning it temptingly on a silver serving platter, your anticipation mounting, I whispered - "Here's what you crave darling." "Enjoy your grilled cheese sandwich."  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH Chris..You are so naughty!! Had me going on this one! You sure know how to serve him what he desires huh? Does he know just how lucky he is?  At first I thought this was going to be too  Love ya, 'Teed'. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
A friendly smirk to this one.  -MVS "Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..." --THE MATRIX http://www.davidicke.com/icke/index1c.html [This message has been edited by MARK V SHELDON (edited 10-12-2001).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou NancyLee and Mark - Thought it was time for a little tee hee. Hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
But I like mine with a sliced kosher dill pickle.Funny,I liked it. paladin |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thanks paladin, I will remember that little side order. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
 WOOOOhooooo.... Lauren~ I keep my ideals, |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
*chuckles* Cute! ~Tier |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou sweet poets. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Nightshade - you sure had me fooled in the beginning of this writing, but a nice twist at the end... BC |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thanks Bill, I just wanted to put a smile on some faces if I could. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I like mine made with garlic butter. Cute write. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah, this is indeed cute. Had me going there for a bit. I didn't realize you were talking about grilled cheese. But if you're taking orders, I like mine with lots of ketchup If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Duncan and Tracey - Thankyou. I had forgotten that poets sometimes forget to eat and that it might be dangerous to write about food...lol. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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