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Hardkore
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0 posted 2001-10-12 04:22 PM


Bic, Bic, the wonderful fix
It's the best correction pen
The white-out for everything
But caution, it's flammable
For best results
Uncap, Recap, Shake
Then, repeat as needed
So next time you make a mistake
Use White-Out, the correction pen

Passion fuels my love
Passion becomes consumed by my love
Without my love I become passionless


© Copyright 2001 Garrett Megaw - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2001-10-13 02:08 AM


Hmmm, I thought Bic was a lighter.  This was different, guess inspiration comes from many places.  lol  
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-10-13 02:11 AM


hmmmm....you haven't been sniffing that stuff, have ya?   Cute poem!
Midnitesun
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3 posted 2001-10-13 02:23 AM


LOL at Serenity's reply. And for Duncan,a Bic pencil has a Bic eraser...throw that nasty old lighter away and get an eraser.
hardkore, this was funny, strange, but funny. Does this mean I am strange too?

Hardkore
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4 posted 2001-10-13 04:56 AM


its about a bic white out pen....haven't you seen those....i just made a poem out of what it said on it

Passion fuels my love
Passion becomes consumed by my love
Without my love I become passionless


Midnitesun
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5 posted 2001-10-13 12:25 PM


Since we never make mistakes, we don't need those things. NOT!!!
LOL again. Thanks for clicking the 'lighter' laughter that helps 'erase' some of the pain.

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