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Hardkore
Junior Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 33
San DIego, California

0 posted 2001-10-12 04:16 PM


One vine lies
Solitary
Beside
The wall
Slowly
Inch by inch
It crawls

Rarely seen,
Brillint
shades
of green,
a beautiful
view
Nothin
though
compared
to you


Passion fuels my love
Passion becomes consumed by my love
Without my love I become passionless


© Copyright 2001 Garrett Megaw - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2001-10-12 04:19 PM


Very nice...floated on it's own like a leaf down the page....well said.  ~NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

Magnus
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Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
2 posted 2001-10-12 04:25 PM


Simple but very powerful,  nice read.
walker
Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
3 posted 2001-10-12 08:09 PM


Cool description of a wonderful feeling.
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