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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-10-12 01:38 PM

Poetry

Displayed emotions,
touched, between lines of comfort,
words to ease, sincere.

Exposed, revealing
a glimpse of intimacy,
heartened with purpose.

Designed with passion's
intensity of color,
to strengthen resolve.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 10-12-2001).]

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-12 01:42 PM

wonderful

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-10-12 01:45 PM

*SMILES* Thanks Wynter~I am glad my muse inspired you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

3 posted 2001-10-12 01:51 PM

Surveying of forms,
Measured lines upon the page,
Expressing feelings,

Designed from passion's
Intensity of color,
Strengthening resolve.

Simply in stating
From the haiku within you,
Released in the forms

Gloom

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2001-10-12 02:05 PM

SEA, thank you and Gentle Spirit, the pleasure was all mine...and in reading your
words..

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2001-10-12 02:09 PM

haiku within me:
unwritten poetry held
softly in my heart....

thank you Professor of Gloom

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

6 posted 2001-10-12 03:12 PM

ah.. the display of the inner self..the touching of one soul by another.... nicely done.... nice indeed!!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-10-12 03:37 PM

Wynter~very nicely done indeed. I really enjoyed this as I love to read about feelings and emotions.
~Hugs, Nancy Lee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

8 posted 2001-10-12 08:22 PM

Beautifully said.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2001-10-22 06:10 PM

Cpat  thank you..your words often touch my soul *s

Enchantress..thanks Nancy, you are a sweetheart


walker..thank you  I am pleased when you stop by and leave your mark.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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