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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-10-12 12:59 PM


In the silence,
where no words are heard,
I can hear
your heart
as it speaks.
It speaks
of a love
that is carried
within your heart
wherever you may be.
It whispers softly
of your dreams, your hopes~
it whispers of us.......

In the silence
I can feel
your heart beat~
reaching out,
touching
with love...
Your essence
surrounds me
with a blanket
of tranquility.

In the silence
your spirit
intertwines
with mine,
embracing us
in a magical moment
as we listen to
the rhapsody~
of love.




On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 10-12-2001).]

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-10-12 01:03 PM


Donna~ this is beautiful!!!  
SmittenKitten
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since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131
where the sky and horizon meet
2 posted 2001-10-12 01:11 PM



"Your essence
surrounds me
with a blanket
of tranquility."


What a beautiful thought....
I really enjoyed this  

Hugs,
~Krista  

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-10-12 03:04 PM


In the silence
your spirit
intertwines
with mine,
embracing us
in a magical moment
as we listen to
the rhapsody~
of love
------------------------------
Oh Donna!  Now you know with me being a hopeless romantic I just have to love this one!  ~Hugs, NancyLee~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

Suetang
Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2001-10-12 06:39 PM


Gentle Spirit
You captured the very essence of romance in this beautiful piece of writing.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

sunshinemist
Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist
5 posted 2001-10-12 06:44 PM


Very nicely done! Enjoyed the softness of this write.  
         ~hugs~

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
6 posted 2001-10-12 07:07 PM


very very nice, Donna...*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
7 posted 2001-10-12 08:32 PM


In the silence
I can feel
your heart beat~
reaching out,
touching
with love...
Your essence
surrounds me
with a blanket
of tranquility.


you have spoken my heart and feelings with this....always lovely...thank you


Lauren~

I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01


Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
8 posted 2001-10-12 09:23 PM



This is so gentle and pretty  
This is my kind of poem!

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

sigheyes
Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323
the winds of destiny
9 posted 2001-10-15 01:45 PM


A exquisite expression of love!  
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