...Thoughts On Friday Morning...

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Open Poetry #16

...Thoughts On Friday Morning...

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-10-12 11:46 AM

the dark morning
greeted my sight, headlights
leading a way
through the rutted knowledge
life goes on

in the north, clouds
loomed low and gray, but
enlightened from below

not the sun
nor the moon

drawing closer
hope comes in the form
of young men in a pretend
game of
war over a victorious
ball of life

floodlights illuminating

living memories

and I waited for
the dissension

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-10-12 11:54 AM

o yuh i say o yuh i feel it

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-10-12 11:56 AM

I just love your style

RMW
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since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

3 posted 2001-10-12 11:59 AM

"...waited for the dissension.." Very good.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
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4 posted 2001-10-12 12:01 PM

Deca--I have waited too, for something to explode out of some normalcy...you have written this well, as you always do write well.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2001-10-12 12:31 PM

"through the rutted knowledge
life goes on." This is so true. Very well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-10-13 12:49 PM

still waiting. . .

well done my friend. . .

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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2001-10-13 12:53 PM

Funny that I am reading this so late at night, as that is when it bothers me most, as I can't see the sky. So well done this was.

~I always have time to listen to someone talking from their heart~

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