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The Smiles of Wiles
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The Smiles of Wiles |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite: The Smiles of Wiles I've dwelled upon relationships Of those beneath my diadem. On my vanity and the pain The salt and pepper dusting them. I've thought upon those inner prods And the terrors and the tolls. Judging my best those constant drives And the tortures and controls? I've analyzed the lovely rose The hazards of the thorns and stem. The wondrous beauty of the bud The dangers of collecting them. I've pondered female parallels Their lovely forms and altered states. Swam the swirling impasse eddies Over come their inebriate. Yet still I've pricked a thorn or two And bloodied often in the coup. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
And in all the while you left warm smiles and lived a life ignoring the bile you took the stem removed the thorn oh we give thanks for the day you were born! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sweet Lady, Thank you so much. *L* |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I've analyzed the lovely rose The hazards of the thorns and stem. The wondrous beauty of the bud The dangers of collecting them. I've pondered female parallels Their lovely forms and altered states. Swam the swirling impasse eddies Over come their inebriate. Yet still I've pricked a thorn or two And bloodied often in the coup. ================================== me thinks ya need to collect butterflies instead of those roses... no thorns and lots of *winkies* and dont forget butterfly kisses    me |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Thank you my sweet butterfly. Love Ya |
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