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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2001-10-12 01:59 AM

She sails silently in the blue and grey
Like Van Gogh on a summer's day
This ship adrift outside the bay
Unable to find safe harbor
Turned away at the crowded docks
Too many souls adrift at once
Seeking only smiles of love
and a place to call home,
not wanting to forever roam
'round the earth
like flotsam and jetsam.
Not enough safe harbors
anymore.

Saunni, may you find your safe harbor, and sail back to us when the seas are smoother.

Heather Miller
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

1 posted 2001-10-12 02:20 AM

AMEN!!!!!!!! BEAUTIFULLY PUT!!!!!!!
AHHHHH that is very beautiful †
Heather (CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-10-12 03:07 AM

Thank you for reading, Heather. I am really going to miss Saunni, whose poetry I just came to know a few days ago.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-10-12 08:50 PM

wonderfully done. . . I hope that Saunni sees this. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-10-12 08:55 PM

I believe you have done well.  I don't feel
comfortable with critique as much as I feel
comfortable saying that it makes sense,  it
carries a message,  the poem shows feelings
and conveys them well.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2001-10-12 08:56 PM

Beautifully penned~

Greeneyes~

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I keep my ideals,
because in spite of everything,
I still believe that
people are really good at heart.
Anne Frank
09*12*01

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2001-10-12 09:03 PM

Very heartfelt! Where is Saunni going???

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2001-10-12 11:21 PM

Rose Petal, Sven, Magnus, Greeneyes: Thanks for reading this. I hope you all have read Saunni's goodbye poem. She is apparently on a quest to rediscover and redefine her purpose in life, and feels it is best not to post at this time in her life. I hope she comes back soon, I barely 'met' her last week through her poetry, here at piptalk.

Saunni's poem is entitle "My Last Walk In The rain" and posted late at night 10/11 or early AM on 10/12/01.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 10-12-2001).]

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