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Daniel J D
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0 posted 2001-10-12 12:56 PM



Beautiful Realities

Rising of the sun on a calm ocean
Opening of a shy white camelia
Flight of the inquisitive butterfly
Glorious rainbow in morning's mist
Meandering splendour of the river
Waterfall's spray amidst chilly winds
Return in arms of a lost friend
Moonlight from Everest's crest
Need for peace and non-violence
Freedom in a child's heart adults forget.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

© Copyright 2001 Daniel J D Ringuet - All Rights Reserved
Heather Miller
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1 posted 2001-10-12 01:01 AM


nice read
Heather (CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

SmittenKitten
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2 posted 2001-10-12 01:11 AM



Daniel~ Yes, beautiful realities indeed!  You're my kind of person...appreciating those simple (but beautifully profound) moments in life  

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

Irish Rose
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3 posted 2001-10-12 09:19 AM


Freedom in a child's heart adults forget."

thank you for this line.

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 10-12-2001).]

WindWalker
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4 posted 2001-10-12 01:03 PM


This was a very good read!!!!!!!
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5 posted 2001-10-12 01:23 PM


Oh, I like this one!! Very nice, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2001-10-13 05:12 PM


*sigh* if only our hearts held the innocence of unconditional love that children so freely give. This poem touched my heart. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.
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7 posted 2001-10-13 06:16 PM




(sad sigh) If only all adults could keep the innocence that they were born with, then our reality would always be flowing with immaculate beauty! (sigh) I believe if we always nurture the child inside of our souls and cradle it gently, we will grow and become the happy people we are born to be and see and feel all the greatest treasures of life! A beautiful bittersweet poem, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2001-10-13 06:38 PM


Daniel, lovely read! Thank you for sharing.  

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

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9 posted 2001-10-13 07:47 PM


Daniel, this is most heart warming.  
Reminded me of my favourite things.  
Thank you.  
~hugs, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~
  

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