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Dennis
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25 posted 10-13-2001 01:39 PM       View Profile for Dennis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dennis

not me, I can't even write OR take a decent picture!  this is good, I liked this!
Dark Angel
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26 posted 10-13-2001 09:47 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

nicely said and I agree!

enjoyed!

Maree  
Startime
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27 posted 10-13-2001 10:03 PM       View Profile for Startime   Email Startime   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Startime's Home Page   View IP for Startime

You have said it so very well. You have said so much in a few passion filled words. Well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

rwood
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28 posted 10-14-2001 08:30 AM       View Profile for rwood   Email rwood   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for rwood

Then you should draw a great big heart! We are all more expressive on paper...but it has to come from a heart and soul...and your's beats across the page. Wonderfully done...an excellent keeper for all us poets of paper and pen!

Sincerely,
Regina
nakdthoughts
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29 posted 10-14-2001 08:40 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

Oh my!..I am not sure that is true about you, but it left me thinking maybe the same about myself....

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


vandana
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30 posted 10-14-2001 10:34 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

enjoy
RSWells
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31 posted 10-14-2001 10:39 AM       View Profile for RSWells   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSWells

A respectful presence takes many forms. Physically it takes only self confidence and passable looks, both ephemeral. In this forum it requires talent and wit, both not easily obtained. Good write.
Janet Marie
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32 posted 03-19-2002 08:51 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

I am better on paper

this time
let's leave me there.
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oh does this hit home...
all poets are better on paper..
and writing "lets us leave "there"

Of all the things in me I could never be,
of the true I kept hidden from view,
the best parts of my heart ...
were the ones touched by you.

jm

Duncan
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33 posted 03-19-2002 10:31 PM       View Profile for Duncan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Duncan

JM---You're a sweetheart.  Oh and next time...I will be taking my own advice!  (And you ain't gonna talk me out of it)  lol
CocoBaci
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34 posted 03-26-2002 01:43 AM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Duncan, this is a treat4me2find this poem you write..
ThanxPoetFriend4a terrific read2nite...
*~coco~*
passing shadows
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35 posted 01-20-2003 04:21 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

oh God! this hurts
 
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