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0 posted 2001-10-11 09:44 PM


Fountains Of Youth (Pantoum)
By: Noah Eaton
10/11/01

Sipping from fountains of youth
Among these meadows of jasmine
Feeling the zephyr drift through
As your hair slips across your skin

Among these meadows of jasmine
I feel your soft body rise
As your hair slips across your skin
Kissing you under hazy skies

I feel your soft body rise
Gazing as children jump and play
Kissing you under hazy skies
Musing as lovers through the day

Gazing as children jump and play
Feeling the zephyr drift through
Musing as lovers through the day
Sipping from fountains of youth

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1 posted 2001-10-11 09:52 PM


Beautiful very beautiful

Heather (CherokeeGirl)

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

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2 posted 2001-10-11 11:12 PM


an excellent pantoum, Noah  
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